Here’s A Poem I’d like to share with YOU


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If you’ve been following my blog, you might remember that I’ve mentioned that I’m doing a Modern & Contemporary American on-line course and loving it.  We’re probably half-way through the course already and have discussed so many great American poems, but it is this poem which was discussed this week that really stayed with me, perhaps it’s because I feel that this is exactly what’s going on in my life right now.

Bernadette Meyer, the American poet who wrote “Invasion of the Body Snatchers” belongs to or is associated with the Language Poets or The New York School which began in the 50s and through-out the 60s.  She’s also known  for doing the  “experiment list”, and what they also call the “I do this I do that” style which the New York poets are known for.

In this poem, she writes about a domestic scene going on in her head/life.  It’s like an inner dialogue with herself.  You can almost imagine her looking out the windows and thinking “New moon out and no snow yet… Oh and yes, it’s November now, oh and I have that appointment with the dentist and it’s my husband’s birthday .. ” and the list or dialogue goes on and on, and on.  We all have that, don’t we?  It is written by a new-mother, but does not talk about the joys of motherhood instead she mentions the time between dinner and Marie’s bedtime is too long.  As parents, we all know what that is like.

Actually, you don’t even have to be a mother to know what she’s talking about.  It can be about a busy person, someone stressed out from work and has no time to do things that mean so much to them.

She goes on and on about the list of things that has happened or happening in her day, and mentions the movie “Invasion of the Body-snatchers” and how she saw an old seed pod on the floor by her desk and remembers that in the movie, if you see one, it’s time to die.  And then she talks about the list of books she wants to read (or read again), a variety of books.  What really struck me was the titles of the books and you can guess from the subjects, it’s almost like an escape from her ordinary day-to-day-life of inanities.  Almost as if to say, okay, I’m of now. 

I like the ordinariness of the poem, but filled with such huge ideas, heavy meanings and the way it reads like a list, or as I’ve mentioned, an inner daily conversation we have with ourselves. On one of the live-lectures, one mentioned that Meyer is a good example of a poet who used “consciousness as a dialogue”.  I like that.

Can you relate to the poem?

I hope you like it as much as I do.

It’s only apt then that my word of the weeks is : Poetry as my days/weeks have been filled with so much inspiring/great works by American Poets!  I’m hoping OpenLearn would do their own on British Contemporary Poetry, wouldn’t that be great?

Now excuse me as I make my own “list”.


  1. Oh I like this. I sometimes find it difficult to relate to poetry but I totally relate to this. I studied 20th Century American literature-loved F Scott Fitzgerald and his depiction of 20’s Europe. Thank you for sharing this poem.

    • You’re most welcome! Like I said, I think parents or even people who don’t have kids, but have busy lives will also be able to relate to this poem 🙂

  2. Stephanie (@LifeAt139a)

    I think we’ve all had times when our heads feel like that – great WotW!

  3. Meghan Fenn (@mummymeg)

    Well I can relate to it! Your course sounds really cool. What a great thing to do! #WotW

  4. thereadingresidence

    What a fabulous sounding course and word to sum up your week. I am a reader, but have to say, I struggle with poetry, but this I do like. Maybe I’ve simply been reading the wrong poetry, which is what I say to people about books if they tell me they don’t like reading (which leaves me aghast, of course!) Thanks for sharing with #WotW

    • Oh definitely! There are many great poets out there that are “readable”. I’ve always loved poetry, but like you, also struggled to understand some, but like you said, you just have to find the poems that speak to you and you’ll be hooked too 😉 x

  5. Kate @ Did That Just Happen?

    Great word of the week! And I’m glad that you are enjoying the class so much, and really, you totally need to share your own work of poetry! I want to know what you wrote after being inspired by this!

    • Oh dear, haven’t written poetry in ages, so I’m a bit shy about sharing. Who knows, I might just be able to share once I’ve gained more confidence 😉

      • Kate @ Did That Just Happen?

        oh please, those of us who read you are ridiculously supportive!
        plus, if it’s crap, I’d tell you so! 🙂

        • Hahahaha! And that’s one of the reasons why I like you so much Kate! 🙂 🙂 🙂

  6. That’s a great word of the week and I love the poem too – really does reflect the kind of thoughts that go through the minds of a busy mum 🙂

  7. Merlinda Little (@pixiedusk)

    Amazing how a poet can transform normal thoughts like this into something magical to read. They really do have gifts! #wotw

  8. krissottoh

    My ‘mom’ passed on to me – and my brother and sister – an absolute love of poetry, particularly by American poets her forte. I’ve just reread this poem a few times as the words, as you say, so resonate with my thoughts as a mother myself. plus the clocks have just changed.

    • I know! That’s why it’s so apt, isn’t it? 🙂 Oh you should take the ModPo course too! They ran it yearly 🙂

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